People
Leave Each Other in Poetry, part 2
This
slowness and
swiftness can be heard in the first line, "O
What can ail thee Knight at
arms." The word "ail," is lingering,
yet there is suddenness in "Knight
at arms." The second line, "Alone and
palely loitering?" "has poignancy
and staccato," Mr. Siegel pointed out.
The uncertainty, doubt of
man, wandering about, is here. It is
romantic in the best sense--where
a person feels reality as strange, subtle,
unknown and the strangeness
is lovely." Later in the poem is this
famous stanza:
She took me to her elfin
grot
And there she
wept
and sigh'd full sore,
And there I shut her wild wild
eyes
With kisses
four.
We learned that Keats,
upon sending this poem out for the first time,
was afraid of how it would
be met--and very much this last line--and so he
attached these comments:
Why
four kisses--you will say--why four,
because I wish to restrain the headlong
impetuosity of my Muse--she would
fain have said "score" without hurting the
rhyme--but we must temper the
imagination, as the Critics say, with
Judgment. I was obliged to
choose an even number that both eyes might
have fair play, and to speak
truly I think two a piece quite sufficient.
Later, Keats wrote
another
version of this poem, which Mr. Siegel also
read. In this version
he changes "With kisses four," to, "So kiss'd to
sleep." Said Mr. Siegel:
The
contest between the comparative swiftness
of "With kisses four," and the lingeringness
of "So kiss'd to sleep," is
another form of the question Keats had about
coldness and warmth. The first
form is grander. The second form, "So
kiss'd to sleep" works too
hard.
And, with deep
comprehension
of John Keats, Mr. Siegel continued:
There
was a cleavage in Keats' mind between
seeing things in a hilarious fashion...and
seeing seriously. There was
a tendency...to make fun of his feelings. And
people will make fun of their
feelings because they don't know all that they
are, all that they mean....
At the end of the poem,
the knight awakens and finds the lady is
gone. The poem concludes
with the knight saying:
'And this is why I sojourn
here
Alone and
palely
loitering;
Though the sedge is withered from the
Lake
And no birds
sing.'
"So there is a change" Mr. Siegel said, "from
a sad individual happening to something like the
human condition." And
then he explained:
It
can be said that every person who has
ever lived has felt he or she wasn't cared for
enough. But that which
is looked for...is also feared....We want to
be loved by something outside
ourselves and we are also afraid of the care
lessening ourselves.
I was moved by Mr. Siegel's deep understanding
of John Keats, and also by his explanation of a
question every person has
about love: the desire for and also the fear of
it. It made me have
so much more respect for humanity.
Conclusion
of
People Leave Each Other in
Poetry
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